Sunday, March 1, 2020

Author's Notes (Week 7, Entering the Inferno)

Changed the guide for Dante as he goes through the circles of hell from Virgil to Johnny, who is also the Grim Reaper as to give him so kind of modern significance as to how he would know his way around Hell and acts as a transition for Michael who also dies from (currently) mysterious circumstances. Changed the First circle to focus more on the aspect of great thinkers only being there as there is not much time to dwell on each individual circle, but just enough to highlight a famous person or specific aspect of the circle. Changed the main character of the First circle to be Albert Einstein as he would be considered a great thinker of the time and would be dead at the time of the book taking place. Changed the second circle to seem more like a Las Vegas style area where apparently a large amount of Kennedy's go out and fraternize, but there is not an in-depth description of whats going on due to Michael being a "boy," as well as length and appropriate content. The last circle talked about in this page is the Third circle, which is Gluttony and not much is changed as their is still a disgusting rain, but there is not yet a mention of how cold it is nor who the inhabitants are outside of Pluto who is introduced by Johnny at the end of the page.

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